2. A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch
- The feedback I received on my last pitch was critical; and constructive. While some of the comments were blunt they were not without purpose. I learned from the feedback that my video needed to be longer and more informative. As well I learned that I needed to deliver the speech with more emotion and enthusiasm. The feed back was a clear response to the wholes within my pitch.
3. What did you change, based on the feedback?
- In this pitch I made sure to add more information about the product as well on the plans for distribution. I also added things to create scenarios and paint a better picture for the viewer as well as trying to entice investors. By making the pitch longer it also allowed me to expound upon the way the product functions and operates.
Joseph,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job being very specific about how your product works. I definitely got a good grasp of how your system operates, and how it would work for me as a customer. Additionally, you did a good job explaining how you planned on launching and expanding. Next time I would maybe include a hook to get your audience’s attention before diving into the logistics of your product. Great job!
Joseph,
ReplyDeleteGreat work on your second elevator pitch, you can really tell that you took in the criticism of your peers and I saw a lot of progress from your first elevator pitch. I like that you dress up for your pitches, this really shows professionalism and how serious you take these assignments. I also really enjoy your product idea.
I thought this elevator pitch was amazing! i have no criticism or critiques for it! You started by talked about an issue and how it effects us by talking about a very relatable story and told us how you have an idea so it never happens again. You then went into large details about the idea. Supper effective pitch! Great job!:)
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